Proposals staged Jun 12, 2026 · W12 clarity edits applied · Carter approves Sunday
| King | Page | Live | Proposed | What Changed |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Farris Wilks (The Roots) | Calling Page (root) | LIVE → | PROPOSED → | W12 edits 16–18: “Kingdom Principles” cut from 500 words to 25; “Covenant Unity” cut from 400 to 30 (scripture kept); “Twelve Domains” cut from 300 to 50. ~1,200 words removed. Zero content loss — every point preserved in first sentence. Faith endings untouched. |
| Henry Kaestner (The Bridge) | Brief | LIVE → | — | W12 produced no text edits for this page. S1317 audit noted: curly-quote pass needed, Cormorant floor fix, rewrite in flight. |
| David Green (The Fire) | Brief | LIVE → | LOCKED | Page is LOCKED (S1315). W12 scored it 10/10 clarity — no edits proposed. S1317 noted 1-line response drift (Carter must verify). |
| Dan T. Cathy (The Backbone) | Brief | LIVE → | — | W12 produced no text edits. S1317 flagged: identity contradiction (Heart vs Backbone), wrong chart embed, mojibake — structural fixes, not clarity. |
| Patrick Bet-David (The Voice) | Brief | LIVE → | — | W12 produced no text edits. Restructure already landed (81→10 sections). S1317: add chart embed, fix Cormorant floor, add card hover. |
| Russell Brunson (The Lungs) | Brief | LIVE → | — | W12 produced no text edits. Scored 46/50 — closest unreviewed King to send-ready. S1317: retitle, add chart embed, replace speculative metrics. |
| Farris Wilks (The Roots) | Brief | LIVE → | — | W12 produced no text edits. Scored 47/50 (highest). S1317 flagged: PFHC→ACDC ticker, $288M→correct market cap (factual fixes, not clarity). |